Okay. As I mentioned I was going to do in my previous post for today, I forwent my sales calls in order to work on The Cabin. I was able to make some global changes as well as condensing the first three chapters into two to make it tighter and more impactful. I think the opening scene is stronger now. I need somebody to help me see if it is strong enough yet.

I intend to do some more work on this tonight. Shooting for 1000 new words. I’ll report later.

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Jared Garrett

Author of the Beat Series

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